The Day I Jumped The Ramp.
"I can do this" I yelled as the engine roared. I was about to jump the ice breaking loop the loop. My heart was racing and so was my bike. The crowd roared "Do it! Do it!" I counted down from 10. 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1, go!
I thought I made it. The ice broke too early. All I could hear was the sound of the crowd screaming. All I could remember was the crowd screaming.
My body is now covered in smelly plaster that smells like muddy water because I fell into a muddy, smelly puddle this morning.
By Hannah.
What a smelly ending! You have used direct speech to make the story interesting. Great short story Hannah. :-)
ReplyDeleteI love your story. I love it so much.
ReplyDeleteawesome story Han!
ReplyDelete-Maggie