The Day I
Jumped The Ramp!
I revved
the bike, the crowd roared as I hit the jump. I felt a wobble and before I knew it,
my tyre came off!
The crowd went silent as I hit the ground. Every one stood up
to see. Paramedics were surrounding me as I stood up and the crowd sounded like an explosion... They were all screaming!
I thought about trying again but my bike was smashed
to pieces. I turned and saw my cat who was lying on the ground behind me not moving. I felt a shiver up my
spine as I wondered if he was dead or alive. I went over and luckily he was fine. I picked him up
and held him in to the air and the crowd cheering, clapped me off the stadium.
By Nathan
Great story
ReplyDelete-Maggie
Great story Nathan! I enjoyed reading it and you have used some interesting adjectives! :-)
ReplyDeleteGreat job nath.
ReplyDeleteI think the Bike Baron might need a new mechanic. I'm pleased that it was happy ending for the cat though! Will he get his Bike fixed? Will the Bike Baron return?
ReplyDeleteI enjoy reading this. Well done.
Mr Andrews (United Kingdom)
Dear Nathan,
ReplyDeleteYou did well on your story I like the way you described it. Don't forget to keep suspense up. Good job!
-Harry
Hi Nathan,
ReplyDeleteI love your Bike Baron ideas, as your imagination is amazing. Don't forget to keep up the suspense!
From Wiktoria
Thank you Harry and Woktoria for the comments. Can't wait to read your blog!
ReplyDeleteNathan.