The Day I Jumped the Ramp!
My heart was pounding,
blood was pumping and the crowd was screaming louder than you could ever
imagine. When accelerating I could smell the smell of glorious achievement.
There, there I was getting closer and closer to my victory. Yes, yes, yes I had
done it!
I had cleared the one and only double back
flip.
Getting first prize and
seeing all the other opponents injured and crippled made me proud and
especially getting the world record made my day.
By Maggie.
This is an exciting piece of writing Maggie. Your use of great adjectives makes me want to keep reading. You have really set the scene.:-)
ReplyDeletegood job maggie it is so well writen
ReplyDeleteDear Maggie,
ReplyDeleteWOW! What a great story. I loved when you cleared the one and only double back flip. Also winning first prize and seeing all the other opponents get injured. At my school we did the Bike Baron activity with Denise as well. I think the activity was really fun. Thanks for letting me read your great story.
From Grace
Dear Grace,
DeleteThank you for your comment. It means a lot and I can't wait to check out your blog.
From Maggie