The bridge
Once, between 1963 and1965 beavers made a dam that was stopping the river from flowing. The government said to make a bridge across the river. They made it when a person thought that the dam that the beavers made was a bridge. He went across it and then it fall down . Then the water came rushing down the river. When all of the people were yelling help and the water was going so fast that the water broke the bridge in half and then the people that were on that side tried to run off the bridge then.the end.
By Daniel and Archie
This is a collection of work from a 4/5/6 classroom in Yea, Victoria, Australia. We would love to hear your feedback through comments. Thank you.
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Monday, 15 September 2014
Thursday, 12 June 2014
100 Word Challenge. Prompt #36 Daniel
One cold
Easter morning, I waked up and found an Easter egg on the kitchen floor. There
was three little men inspecting the egg and were wondering what happened to the
egg.
Luckily the
egg hadn’t broken yet. So I stepped on it to break it. I wanted to watch the
little men inspect it all day so I sat on the floor eating an Easter egg
watching them.
I thought
that I should melt the chocolate egg back together into a whole egg once again.
So I did. I showed the men and they were so happy!
Monday, 2 June 2014
100 Word Challenge Prompt #35 Daniel
On a black and stormy night, down a long street, was a forbidden house. In front of the house was a rusty gateway to the drive way.
It was very cold outside and I was walking home from school I past my friend who looking at the house. I said, "what are you doing?" He said "I am just waiting for someone to just come out of that house."
Just then I heard a noise. I squealed, "what was that?"
He asked, "what was what?" I heard it again. He said "Oh, that's a horrible noise! Quick! Let's run away!" We ran like we had never been running before!
Wednesday, 26 March 2014
100 Word Challenge- The Night Zookeeper
The Night Zoo
We were
walking dawn the Brad Street from the restaurant when we walked past the Night
Zoo with a zookeeper out the front. He started to talk to us. We didn’t know
what he was saying because he was talking in French. I said, “We are not
French.” Then he said, “I was asking if you want to be a Night Zookeeper to fight all the evil monsters from Nilth. You
will gets lots of weapons such as an ak47, 30.O6, mpg, rifle, 44 magnum, bow
arrow and mini gun.” I jumped at this opportunity and said, "Yes!!!"
By Daniel.
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