The Day I Jumped The Ramp.
Hello I'm Ruby, and I'm a famous motorbike rider.
I'm going to tell you about when I broke the world record for motorbike jumps!
My heart was beating as fast as it could, the crowd didn't think I could make it, I was about to cry when my cat started cheering along with the crowd. The jump was huge. Biggest jump in the entire world. Would I get the world record title?
I started my bike then I went for the jump, I don't know what happened after that. I think I blacked out, but all I can remember is the crowd cheering and I woke up in hospital with my cat next to me. Both of us have to be in wheel chairs for the rest of our lives.
It was definitely worth it, as I am now the world record holder!
By Ruby.
Exciting story Ruby. I like you use of adjectives and the way you ask a question to gain the reader's interest. Sorry about your cat!
ReplyDeletegreat story ruby im sorry about your cat
ReplyDeletecongrats on the world record!
ReplyDelete-Maggie