I would like
to be the Night Zookeeper because then I could be a hero. I would save the
magical and talented animals from the evil monsters from the land of Nilth. I
will fight until I die, stay up all night and practice fighting until the
smelly, gross, terrible and scary monsters come to our beautiful land Earth. I
will be the woman who saved the one of a kind zoo that has been holding the
most beautiful animals. This is why I would like to be the Night Zookeeper for
2014 and for the rest of my life.
By Hannah.
You make some very good points as to why you would make a great zookeeper. Good luck with your application.
ReplyDeleteWhat a great application for becoming the Night Zookeeper! You write with enthusiasm and that shines through in your choice of words, and use of imagination.
ReplyDeleteKeep up the great writing,
Nicola Richardson, 100wc team, Tyne and Wear, UK
Hannah, your bravery and determination to save the animals comes through in your writing. You support your main idea with many excellent details. Well done. Hired for the job!
ReplyDeleteMrs. Peterson (Team 100wc)
TX, USA
I like that story Hannah bad monsters good animals nice story hannah
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