100 word challenge
I’d like to be the
Night Zookeeper so I’d be able to ride a unicorn and throw a giant snake at the
Nilth monsters. I would go back in time with the time traveling elephant and
stop the Nilth monsters from coming back and destroying the Night Zoo. I would
keep care of all the flying hippos, dancing rhinoceroses, circus butterflies,
lightning fast foxes, the magical worms, V8 birds, the tackling ants, the
drawing frogs, the walking sharks, swimming cats and the meerkats in the trees.
I will never let the Nilth monsters take over this very special word!
Hello Maclaren,
ReplyDeleteI must say a chance to ride a unicorn does sound like fun and your idea to use the time travelling elephant to go back in time to stop the Nilth monsters is a good idea. Can you imagine the adventures in time we could have? The idea would be a good base for some very exciting writing.
You also seem to have a good idea of the assorted animals in the Night Zoo Keeper’s zoo. Being aware of the animals in your care and knowing how to protect and care for them are important. Well done.
With the care you have shown in spelling and punctuation, I can see you are a talented writer. I most certainly hope you continue entering the 100WC. Good writers need to share the adventures and worlds they create with others.
Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia
I really liked all the animals you used in your story and I also would like to ride on the unicorn. I wonder if you would get the job as a night zookeeper and I also wonder if you would beat all the monsters of Nilth?
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I really like the sense of humour you used in your story with the unicorns and the snakes
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