THE DAY I JUMPED THE RAMP!
My tyres were rolling slowing, I revved the throttle
and my bike started to go faster and faster. When I was half way up the ramp I felt a tingle go up my spine. I tried to back down but I couldn’t. When I was in the
air my bike started doing a backflip. I was terrified! The crowed was shouting with pleasure with
what I had achieved. When I hit the ground I had an explosive stack.
I woke up in hospital a few days later with nurses all
around me. I tried to move but I couldn’t. The nurses then decided to tell me
that I would be paralysed for the rest of my life. The backflip was still worth
it.
BY
JACK
Cool story
ReplyDelete-Maggie
Good story Jack but I do wish the ending had been happier! :-)
ReplyDeleteYou build up the tension brilliantly Jack. Looks like it'll be the Bike Baron's last ever jump though. I'm amazed at how he's stayed so positive despite being paralysed.
ReplyDeleteWell done, keep up the hard work.
Mr Andrews (United Kingdom)
Thank you very much for replying David Andrews, I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for thinking of the activity.
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