#30 100 Word Challenge …And
when I opened the cupboard…
Have you ever had the
most annoying sister in the world? Well… I have the worst and the most annoying
sister in the world.
It all happened about two or three days ago when she got up
and came down to the kitchen. She started playing with her food and that was
really unusual because she never does that and she has great table manners. She
said she was one hundred and forty years old but she was really only five. Now
I really thought something was going wrong in her brain. We went up stairs and
when I opened the cupboard door she closed it.
She’s so
annoying!
From Maclaren
It surely seems that this little sister is annoying, but what an imagination she has! Since she was not acting normally, I wondered if she went through the cupboard door and into another world, then came down for breakfast. I thought about that because of her going back up and closing the cupboard door, as if to keep her big sister from looking in. You have written a piece that allows the reader to use his/her imagination. Good job.
ReplyDeleteBarbara McFall (Team100WC)
The Phoenix School, Salem, MA USA