The bridge
Once, between 1963 and1965 beavers made a dam that was stopping the river from flowing. The government said to make a bridge across the river. They made it when a person thought that the dam that the beavers made was a bridge. He went across it and then it fall down . Then the water came rushing down the river. When all of the people were yelling help and the water was going so fast that the water broke the bridge in half and then the people that were on that side tried to run off the bridge then.the end.
By Daniel and Archie
Hello Daniel & Archie,
ReplyDeleteWell done to you both. Your great choice of words allowed me to visualise your story. I could see the water rushing down the river towards the bridge. I bet the people on the bridge would have been shocked to see it start to crumble.
Mrs Scharf (Team 100WC)