This is a collection of work from a 4/5/6 classroom in Yea, Victoria, Australia. We would love to hear your feedback through comments. Thank you.
Monday, 15 September 2014
100wc prompt #3
100 word challenge prompt #3
The morning came. I ran to the bridge to see it finished for the first time. I walked along the path. I could see the bridge. I started to walk along it. I noticed it hadn't been finished. I waited 25 months for this bridge to be finished. I screamed then jumped off the bridge. I couldn't breath. Something was holding me down. I remembered the day the bridge started to get built. I heard someone scream ' ah a girl is drowning.' I went down deeper and deeper. I don't remember anything. P.s I lived. I'm telling a story.
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Great job Hannah I love the adjectives used
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