100 Word Challenge Prompt #34. Maggie
I
was tired
and angry and I needed to go somewhere peaceful and quiet.
But
where could I go? Should I go to Italy? Greece? Bahamas? Paris? I think I would
like going to the Bahamas.
Three
days later I was in the beautiful Bahamas, drinking lemonade and swimming in
the ocean. But then, a whale jumped out of the water and onto my body! I nearly
suffocated under the whale. I thought to myself that if I had of stayed home it
would if been a lot safer with no whales!
One
day later I was home. At home. Sweet home. Away from the terrifying Bahamas.
Maggie, your story has a good "home sweet home" message. In this case, home was much more peaceful than the whale incident! I enjoyed reading your writing.
ReplyDeleteMrs. Peterson (Team 100wc)
TX, USA
Thanks Diane for your comment because you took up your time to write it, it means a lot.
DeleteMaggie
Thanks for reading my amazing story can't wait to see yours. by by
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