Monday, 26 May 2014

100 word challenge prompt #34. By Hannah




"36,37,38,39,40! Ready or not, here I come!" called out Mia. Mia had finished counting but where could I go? Behind the bushes? No. In the tree? No. Where else? I know! In the secret cubby! Mia will never find me there. I saw her running past. She came back. Mia yelled out "Hannah I found you" I thought I got found first but I didn't. Mia found Madison, Beth and Bella before me. This was the first time I had come first in hide and seek. I won the prize of getting to sleep on the couch! I finally won hide and seek!

2 comments:

  1. Well, done, Hannah. It's a simple story but well told, with excellent grammar and punctuation.

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  2. Thanks Elizabeth. Its hard to write a story with only 100 words.
    From Hannah

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