It was a normal Sunday morning as Jack was going for his daily run, when he realised that he was being followed by a large gang. The first thing that came to his mind was to bolt. That's what he did. Then the gang started to chase after him. He was running down the alleyway when he realised there was a dead end. He thought to himself but where could I go? As he thought about it, there were loud gun shot sounds. That was when then air was filled with the sound of Police sirens. Jack was so thankful that the Police came to save him.
This is a collection of work from a 4/5/6 classroom in Yea, Victoria, Australia. We would love to hear your feedback through comments. Thank you.
Wednesday, 28 May 2014
100 WORD CHALLENGE. PROMPT#34 JACK
It
all started when I was walking down to the bus stop. I thought someone was
watching me and I turned around and saw nothing. I kept on walking and walking and I still thought
someone was watching me. When I got to the bus stop all my other friends were
there as well, waiting for the bus. I explained to my friends what happened
while I was walking there. One of them said, “That’s what happened to me too!”
I
really didn’t want to go to school and I thought about where could I go. I
couldn’t go back home…
I
was scared!
Monday, 26 May 2014
100 Word Challenge Prompt #34. Maggie
100 Word Challenge Prompt #34. Maggie
I
was tired
and angry and I needed to go somewhere peaceful and quiet.
But
where could I go? Should I go to Italy? Greece? Bahamas? Paris? I think I would
like going to the Bahamas.
Three
days later I was in the beautiful Bahamas, drinking lemonade and swimming in
the ocean. But then, a whale jumped out of the water and onto my body! I nearly
suffocated under the whale. I thought to myself that if I had of stayed home it
would if been a lot safer with no whales!
One
day later I was home. At home. Sweet home. Away from the terrifying Bahamas.
100 word challenge prompt #34. By Hannah
"36,37,38,39,40! Ready or not, here I come!" called out Mia. Mia had finished counting but where could I go? Behind the bushes? No. In the tree? No. Where else? I know! In the secret cubby! Mia will never find me there. I saw her running past. She came back. Mia yelled out "Hannah I found you" I thought I got found first but I didn't. Mia found Madison, Beth and Bella before me. This was the first time I had come first in hide and seek. I won the prize of getting to sleep on the couch! I finally won hide and seek!
100 Word Challenge. Promt #34 Emma
One, two, three…
“AAAGGGHHH! There is nowhere to hide’ I
screamed.
Jenny yelled, “Just hide!”
“But where?”
“Anywhere!!!”Jenny then climbed up a tree.
I thought to myself I can hide up a tree too. I
ran to a tree and wrapped my arms and legs around it, but I slid to the ground.
Just then I saw a boy hiding in a bush. Brilliant! I saw a bush and dived into
it… “OWW PRICKLES!” I shouted. Just then
an idea came to my mind. I would follow the seeker to get found last. The seeker
turned around and there I was… right behind him. I lost.
100 Word Challenge. Prompt #34. Ruby
100 Word Challenge. Prompt #34. Ruby
I was on the
plane to Uganda when, “CRASH! BANG!” The engine fell off! The nose of the plane
was pointing straight down, but where could I go? The plane was small and there
were lots of people. I heard someone shout, “Jump off the plane. There is water
below us!”
We were only
100 metres above the water and I had to jump. I closed my eyes and jumped into
the water…
I looked
above me and saw people with their babies. Then they jumped. Everyone was
injured but me, so I searched the demolished plane for the first aid kit. There
it was!
Friday, 9 May 2014
Logan’s 100 Word Challenge
There was a
bee that had his leg jammed in a wooden table and he couldn’t fly away, he
tried to but he was stuck. Suddenly there were mini people that came out of the
sky and they got their cameras and sticks out and started poking the bee. The
bee got angry and stung them. The bee
died and the mini people went to get help. They went to the doctors to fix
their sting. The Doctor said “Wow, that’s a big sting” as he pulled it out,
“Where did you get that giant sting?”
100 Word Challenge Ruby
Fred was a
butterfly keeper. Not just any kind of butterfly keeper. The butterflies looked
like massive bees with makeup. He loved his job. He loved looking after
butterflies.
One day Fred went
looking for food and he found a bee’s nest in the tree and he saw a huge bee. He
thought it was a butterfly so he took it back home with him.
When Fred and the
bee got back with the food, the bee tried to sting every butterfly. Fred knew
if the bee stung one person, the bee would die and he would be extremely sore…
Piggy Chicks Strikes Again: Prompt #31 Rohan
‘Wee war wee war’ Went the sirens on the police force
Lamboghini Diablo as they were chasing
Piggy Chicks … Wonder Man’s arch nemesis. Red and blue lights were flashing
as the chase was getting faster and more furious, racing down through the city
of Pompeii, leaping over buildings and through the allies. Then all of the
sudden Piggy Chick’s Bee starts plummeting
towards the ground. It hit the ground with a mighty thump. Piggy Chicks
quickly escaped when the police arrived at the scene.
The Bee still lies there today and will never ever go
anywhere else- too heavy to move!
100 Word Challenge Nathan
“Help!
Help! There is a giant bee chasing me on Raglan Street” “We will be there in an
instant” replied the Police.
As the Police arrived, the bee was eating Sammy. The Police called for ‘backup’ as soon as they saw him. When all the backup arrived, they started to shoot at the bee but the bee just dogged all the bullets and started to attack all the Police. The fighter jet finally arrived and shot the bee down. It was all over. The bee was on the ground dead. The Police were taking photos and taking swabs to test the DNA.
As the Police arrived, the bee was eating Sammy. The Police called for ‘backup’ as soon as they saw him. When all the backup arrived, they started to shoot at the bee but the bee just dogged all the bullets and started to attack all the Police. The fighter jet finally arrived and shot the bee down. It was all over. The bee was on the ground dead. The Police were taking photos and taking swabs to test the DNA.
100 Word Challenge Maggie
In
the world of dolls there lived a bee. The poor bee was tortured every day.
One
day the bee decided to make a change to how he was being treated in life. He
made an escape plan and started planning straight away. He figured out many
years ago that he had a stinger on his bottom. He called it a prickle. The
prickle became the main idea of his plan that he had made.
The
day finally came. A fight broke out. The bee won the challenge and lived
happily ever after.
So
the bee today is still planning to escape.
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