The Black Flash by Hannah
“Time to
wake up” Melody said to herself as she got out of bed. She had been woken up by
the singing of the birds. She had breakfast, did her hair and then went to get
dressed. She opened the door and saw a black flash so she went to her mum and
said, “Mum something’s wrong!” “How do you know that?” asked Melody’s Mum. “Ummm…
well I got up and had breakfast, then I did my hair and got dressed and when I opened
the cupboard door a black flash went past!”
“I’m sure it’s
nothing” replied Melody’s mum. I saw another black flash... I fell!
Our class has just read your 100wc and we all enjoyed it. Hannah we think you have been very creative. Don't forget when a new person speaks, a new line begins!
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Thank you. It was very hard to think of what to write. I love reading other peoples comments. They make me so happy.
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