Friday 9 May 2014

100 Word Challenge Ruby

Fred was a butterfly keeper. Not just any kind of butterfly keeper. The butterflies looked like massive bees with makeup. He loved his job. He loved looking after butterflies.
One day Fred went looking for food and he found a bee’s nest in the tree and he saw a huge bee. He thought it was a butterfly so he took it back home with him.

When Fred and the bee got back with the food, the bee tried to sting every butterfly. Fred knew if the bee stung one person, the bee would die and he would be extremely sore…

2 comments:

  1. Hi Ruby
    Oh no! I liked the idea of butterflies looking like bees, there is so much that could go wrong!
    You have organised and structured your writing really clearly which makes it easy to read, well done.
    Miss T team 100wc

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  2. Thanks Miss T,
    I always love writing 100 word challenges
    and reading the replies.

    Ruby.

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