Friday 9 May 2014

100 Word Challenge Jack

100 WORD CHALLENGE
Buzz was a huge bee. He was on the loose and chasing people all around the town.

Alfonzo called the Police as soon as he saw that the bee was killing people by stinging them with his stinger. When the Police came they started to shoot at Buzz. After a few shots at Buzz, he fell out of the sky and hit the ground with a deafening THUD! All the people were amazed that the Police had saved the town from the giant Buzz-Kill. Alfonzo went over to Buzz and he thanked all of the Police for saving the town.                      

1 comment:

  1. Great piece Jack. I really enjoyed reading it because the detail that you put in it was great for example (he fell out the sky andhit the ground with a deafening thud.) Great job.

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